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Diehard GrandPrix Fan

Pontiac Dominator

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Yet another one of my try. This one has serious proportion error, though I tried to be original, but I don't like the outcome, but I hope you like it.

Draw_Pontiac_Dominator1.jpg

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Thanx for the compliment, can you tell me what I should change in order to make it not look so crooked and out of proportion? I am still fighting with the proportion and this one came out the worst in terms of proportions.

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Draw your wheels first, and make sure they are all flat on the ground, and/or draw the bottom line of the body first and make sure it's straight.

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Diehard, I want you to read this tutorial and try doing a few sketches/exercises while you read it and after you have read it. This is a very good tutorial that will help you learn perspective well, in my opinion.

http://archive.cardesignnews.com/studio/tu...etch/index.html

As for your sketch, yes it is not in correct proportions, but I see you are really trying to do better. It's actually a quite clean design, though, and I don't totally disapprove of it.

Edited by YellowJacket894
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Thank you for the link. Great deal of information there. I have bookmarked it, and will be checking there from time to time.

Thanx.

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Re-work I did. I tried to follow what the link said, but it didn't quite work, so I tried it again. I tried to draw the wheels first, but the end product came out funny, so I pretty much have given that up for now. For this one, I tried to focus on getting the proportion right, not sure if it worked but. I kinda BURROWED the design cue for the rear quarter and the tail-lights from Pagani Zonda and burrowed current Solstice's bumper design a bit, and it came out as derivative as it can be. So much for an original design..... :banghead:

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Even better!

It kinda lost that mean look to it... maybe if you moved the grille up to level with the headlights and did a lower fascia treatment... :thumbsup:

Edited by vonVeezelsnider
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Re-work. Well, actually, this was originally intended as a Firebird, but it just didn't come out aggressive enough, nor sporty enough to be called a Firebird, so I named it as Dominator instead to just add to this thread.

Draw_Pontiac_Dominator3.jpg

As usual, perspective has serious problems, though I tried to implement all the tips I got from that link.

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