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this is the first version with many to follow, please tell me what i am doing wrong and how i fix it :lol:

or just complement on its beauty ^_^

either way, i need some feedback to help us attract people to the show

by the way, the rice and the stang are on there just so we get more people to show up...if it were only gm muscle cars only like 50 cars would show up... :(

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oh and also its going to be printed in blk & wht so dont say anything about color!

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Well as a graphic designer (not by trade anymore but by Schooling) I can say it's not too bad. :)

The only real issue I have is the text over the T/A. Distracting and kind of a put down to a nice car. What's up wiht the cat-print background?

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Shame on you, 68! That's a T/A Firehawk :lol:

I'm guessing the Cat print has to do with the school mascot.

Fijian:

Looks pretty good to me. You might want to try re-sizing a few thngs t keep the text on the background instead of the images and the map looks slightly crooked. I'm surprised that you are worried about enough people showing-up if you don't include Rice and Motorcycles. Japanese cars very rarely show up to car shows around here.

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oh yeah, we are the Washington Huskies(kind of dog-wolf-fox)

that paw print is like our mascot..

i'll definetly try moving the text around.

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Wow. I'd say that looks pretty darn good.

That written, Sixty8 and Camino have some good suggestions for you.

One I would add is _perhaps_ consider using a different font for the "details" (i.e. time, date, etc.). It just seems (to me, mind you) a bit hard to read...maybe use something a bit "eaiser on the eyes". Eh, can't put into words what I mean exactly...sorry :(.

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