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Um... Education and firearms aren;t mixing too well these days.

All I got to say...

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So many questions unanswered.

What is the significance of the documents that Pringle repeatedly stole? What sort of changes was the school board planning? What were his reasons for stealing it? I suppose I should go one step further and ask why Chris Pringle, former New Zealand cricketer, snapped in the first place.

I could nitpick much further than that, but I think the most important thing is to get the storytelling down.

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